I'm the founder of SnapLead, a tool designed to help businesses efficiently tag and manage leads on LinkedIn. Check it out here: SnapLead Landing Page.
Despite seeing traffic, my conversion rates aren't great. I would really value your feedback on a few points:
Any insights you can provide would be hugely helpful!
That's very helpful, thank you. I'm updating it now.
your tool seems cool. but the landing page needs a retouch.
The purpose of the product is not immediately clear from the headlines and subheadline.
It's a bit short. You can apply clichés.
Hi Stephen,
So I would say try to show how would someone do the same without using your product and then show them how much easier, faster and organised it is if they use your product.
Emphasise the problem, so they can emotionally relate to it.
All in all, I would say try to incorporate videos or gifs of the product while using it. Try to speak the language of someone who might need this product. If that person is someone doing sales, imagine all the daily frustrations they go and try to write the copyright with that person in mind.
Hope it helps. Good luck 🥳