Which copy is better?
Hi, I'm building Traid - a tool that manages the sponsorship process between Youtubers to sponsors.
Would love to get your feedback on the copy presented here.
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Hi, I'm building Traid - a tool that manages the sponsorship process between Youtubers to sponsors.
Would love to get your feedback on the copy presented here.
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I prefer the one on the right, I think it's clearer!
I'd tweak the headline to be benefit-oriented instead.
Something like: "Where Youtubers find Sponsors to increase their earnings"
Subhead like: "No effort needed to find, email, and wait for the sponsor's answer. With Traid, you can find the perfect fit for your audience with no upfront cost. "
CTA: "Find My YouTube Sponsor"
Under the CTA, you can add: "65 content creators already found their sponsors" assuming you already have an X amount of customers.
I found the one on the left to be easier to understand. Take it with a grain of salt though, maybe the wording on the right is clear enough for people who are Youtubers.
Both looks good in term of visual and are easy to read!
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