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Whats Your Feedback on Landing Page

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    It's clear you need someone with a better level of English to go over the texts.

    You should look how your website looks on a mobile phone portrait mode.

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    As mentioned by @codycwiseman 1st landing text need little perfection.
    And have more pages for better seo.
    Do you really serve those many clients?

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    It's not really clear to me what it does, is it Buffer for Ads? Even the screenshots don't really tell me what I can do with it.

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    Hi Yuting Zhong,
    First of all, great progress on the landing page!
    Here are a few things you might want to consider:

    1. The wordings are verbose or visually look crowded. Especially in the "features block." For example, Automatic publishing on all platforms. Then you have another medium title "With ads concierge..."

    My suggestion is to either shorten the text or keep it only 2 sizes of text. Because now you have 3 hierarchies of text.

    1. The value proposition. It says, "The definitive tool to manage your campaigns," But it isn't clear what problem you're solving. I wonder if you can tweak the wording to make your value proposition clearer. What is the reason people will want to use your tool?

    hope this helps

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    The landing page looks promising. The title needs to be worked on.

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    I love the design!

    But... I can't get a good idea of what it does from the hero.

    Take a look at "StartupSauce" to see how they do it. They have crazy high conversion rate.

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    I didn't see it mentioned so far, but I felt like the site logo was different from the rest of the brand (https://shot.screenden.com/w3XDw44z) Reds vs yellows. :)

    Your DA and traffic stats are really impressive from what I can see with my tools! Seems like you have a market cornered :) Good luck scaling!

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    I like the page, its bold!

    There's 4 things that stood out to me:

    1. "The definitive tool to manage your campaigns.": Sounds a bit too vague for me, I think it would be better to write what unique value you provide with this. To be fair, I struggle with this too!
    2. Image doesn't load for "Automatic publishing on all platforms" section.
    3. A couple issues with the spacing You can watch this video to learn more about spacing.
    4. Testimonials: People generally look for a human connection and testimonials really help with that. You have these really cool clients so it shouldn't be a problem for you to get some testimonials.

    I really like the pricing section, its very clear!

    I would love it if you can provide some feedback on my landing page here

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